These four walls behold
These four walls bare witness
Absorbing, greedily drinking
Our heat, our sweat, our libations
This abandon, this savagery
Our maddening sensual passion
I love works like this, but can I suggest one change?
These four walls behold These four walls bear witness These four hi-def cameras record....
It makes for powerful poetry.
:-) My favorite line is "This abandon", ah, the power we find when we are with someone who lets us let go, to abandon care and concern and self-doubt, who, when in their presence, we can drop all masks and be who we truly feel we are.
LGS: This is exactly how you should start your day. I'm feeling rather chuffed I set you up so deliciously, lovely...
hot girl: Ta muchly!
Frenchy: Oh my, yes. I suspect your walls could tell a few stories too, gorgeous...
Sir Thomas: Yes, yes, leaving nothing but smouldering ash...
Advizor: Thank you so much. As for your suggestion, my walls clearly aren't as technologically up-to-date as yours! Besides, since I'm partial to clicking pics, it's an easy step to live action featuring my witnessing walls...
Black Pearl: Ooh, a girl fly to go with my boy fly! Buzz on next to me, lovely...
Adulterous Letch: It's funny you should say that because my walls are a slightly blushing lilac. But I'm certain that's nothing more than coincidence... ;)
1manview: There are times when the fewer the words, the better. Thank you so much...
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Ah, to be a fly on any one of those walls...
I so should not be reading blogs first thing in the morning... it sets me up for a very horny day. Beautiful.. lucky walls.
LGS xx
These four walls could recount so many passionate stories.... Ahhh!
the walls were burning down with our desire...
to the ground....
I love works like this, but can I suggest one change?
These four walls behold
These four walls bear witness
These four hi-def cameras record....
It makes for powerful poetry.
:-)
My favorite line is "This abandon", ah, the power we find when we are with someone who lets us let go, to abandon care and concern and self-doubt, who, when in their presence, we can drop all masks and be who we truly feel we are.
Very thought provoking. Thank you.
"Buzz Buzz" said the tiny fly!
Os: I have your corner reserved. Fly on in...
LGS: This is exactly how you should start your day. I'm feeling rather chuffed I set you up so deliciously, lovely...
hot girl: Ta muchly!
Frenchy: Oh my, yes. I suspect your walls could tell a few stories too, gorgeous...
Sir Thomas: Yes, yes, leaving nothing but smouldering ash...
Advizor: Thank you so much. As for your suggestion, my walls clearly aren't as technologically up-to-date as yours! Besides, since I'm partial to clicking pics, it's an easy step to live action featuring my witnessing walls...
Black Pearl: Ooh, a girl fly to go with my boy fly! Buzz on next to me, lovely...
You might become the first person to ever cause a wall to blush. ;)
Classic write Cheeky Minx, short and powerful...
Adulterous Letch: It's funny you should say that because my walls are a slightly blushing lilac. But I'm certain that's nothing more than coincidence... ;)
1manview: There are times when the fewer the words, the better. Thank you so much...
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